Moon

[Casehardened]

Oh should of included the
E on breath silly me. Can I include this somehow?

I feel honoured to be able to be associated with your poetry albeit in such a minor way

Well done, what a talent to posses!

[Ghost biscuit]

Hi

Hiya CH
Thank you for doing the edit. Thank you for being so kind as to my words.

Regards,

Ghost....B

[welshgirl]

It's been awhile Ghost Biscuit.........I am getting poem withdrawal symptoms here I am sure you have another there somewhere lol

Take care

Welshgirl

[Ghost biscuit]

WG

Hi WG,

I am sure you have another few poems as well, look forward t reading some of yours, yes I will put some more up, just don't want to make anyone yawn. I think I'm eating my head haha

Regards,

Ghost....B

[welshgirl]

I am sure you will not make anyone yawn Ghost biscuit I for one love your poems

Welshgirl

[Ghost biscuit]

Crontrol

My life is in disarray
You control me in everyway

G.B

[welshgirl]

Knew you had one there somewhere

[Ghost biscuit]

Hi

Hiya WG,

That one was inspired by a certain person though.

G.B

[Ghost biscuit]

Broken

You took the children away
Injected your poison in what they say
They no longer have their voice
They no longer have a choice
Their hate they now have for me
Its so heart breaking don't YOU see
You have worked you magic
You think your fantastic
The evil in what you do
I've seen before Its nothing new
As we creep ever forward in time
I know its not me that has damaged their minds
You are so blinded by your hatred for me
This is child abuse don't you see
This needs to end
So the broken can mend

G.B

[welshgirl]

So tragic Ghost B are you ok today?

Welshgirl x

[Ghost biscuit]

Hi WG,

I will be. Thanks.

Regards,

Ghost....B

[welshgirl]

No probs pm me anytime you need to chat

Sending big

Welshgirl

[Ghost biscuit]

Ok I will do thanks.

G.B

[Ghost biscuit]

ch I need to edit

Hi

I need to edit my last poem the 4th line from the bottom
Should read are YOU not are so. Thanks in advanced.

G.B