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    Take some time:

    If you take the time to know me
    I'm really not so bad;
    Just another mixed-up girl,
    Perhaps a little mad;
    I've had a trauma in my life
    That's made me very sad,
    Full of self-hatred and of shame
    And wishing that I had
    Behaved in quite a different way,
    And been more fully clad
    Instead of strutting like a slut
    In front of a young lad.

    He took my innocence and youth
    When I was just eighteen;
    He raped me, but the awful truth
    Was that I've felt unclean
    For many years since that sad day
    Because I CAME, to my dismay.

    Oh, what a worthless slut am I,
    That when he chose to satisfy
    His lust upon my quivering flesh
    My body, trapped in its own mesh
    Of God knows what, in its own spasm
    Responded to him with an ORGASM!

    How can I help but blame myuself
    For what occurred? Oh, on the shelf
    Of memory's tattered, faded bloom
    I live again the shameful doom
    When unaware and fresh, I fell
    Into an endless inner hell.

    I've had a trauma in my life
    That's left me very sad,
    But if you take the time to know me
    I'm really not so bad,
    Just another mixed-up girl,
    Perhaps a little mad.
    Kindness is the most important thing.
    After that maybe sincerity.
    Be true to yourself.
    A condemnation out of ignorance is always unjust.

  • #2
    Dear Fem,

    What a super little poem, you are very talented

    As to the theme, I wonder if it might help you to know that an 'aggravating factor', when judges are deliberating as to what sentence to hand down for rape, is to cause the victim to ejaculate. Obviously this terminology is angled towards a male victim but you can see what they're getting at. Sometimes the mind has no power over the body e.g. you couldn't stop your heart beating or your digestive system from working.
    'What doesn't kill you makes you stronger'

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